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Fragmented
In the dead room I fear,
The reflection so near,
Of love lost in tears,
For reasons unclear.
The white walls of pain,
A life preordained.
The truth in her eyes,
Slowly tranquilised.
Memories slip away,
Fall silent and decay;
Only shadows remain,
Of a life lost in flames.
In the garden of shame,
Lies a man with no name,
An omen unborn,
Entangled with thorns.
I feel fragmented,
Cruel thoughts embedded;
My heart has cemented,
Sick and tormented.
The reflection so near,
Of love lost in tears,
For reasons unclear.
The white walls of pain,
A life preordained.
The truth in her eyes,
Slowly tranquilised.
Memories slip away,
Fall silent and decay;
Only shadows remain,
Of a life lost in flames.
In the garden of shame,
Lies a man with no name,
An omen unborn,
Entangled with thorns.
I feel fragmented,
Cruel thoughts embedded;
My heart has cemented,
Sick and tormented.
Author's Note
Gazing into my soul...
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Re. Fragmented
24th Jun 2018 10:30am
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24th Jun 2018 1:30pm
Bravo SK ... nice poetic introspection ... nice job with the rhyming ...
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Re. Fragmented
24th Jun 2018 6:36pm
dearest Dark Sun fantastic flow
with a deep and heavy message..
excellent..
love Crim
with a deep and heavy message..
excellent..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Fragmented
25th Jun 2018 11:31am
Re. Fragmented
25th Jun 2018 3:30am
What a great write SK!
“...In the garden of shame,
Lies a man with no name,
An omen unborn,
Entangled with thorns...”
This stanza right here is just fantastic imagery!
“...In the garden of shame,
Lies a man with no name,
An omen unborn,
Entangled with thorns...”
This stanza right here is just fantastic imagery!
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Re: Re. Fragmented
25th Jun 2018 11:29am
Re: Re. Fragmented
25th Jun 2018 12:09pm
Work can be like that sometimes...Thanks for your comments. Maybe I should be more positive, but poets like to languish in misery.
Re. Fragmented
Anonymous
25th Jun 2018 7:24pm
We often have to mix it up between dark and light, heavy and light, but this is a beautiful write...looking in deeper....absolutely love it so well done Dark Sun👌
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Re: Re. Fragmented
25th Jun 2018 7:29pm
Thanks so much Allyzone. Wasn't sure how it would come across because there is a much deeper meaning behind it all, but I'm not ready to write about that just yet.
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Anonymous
25th Jun 2018 7:40pm
And thats ok....it will be written once you are ready or not...either way it truly doesnt matter when....
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2nd Jul 2018 8:14pm
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