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Brown Sugar Queen
my beautiful
brown sugar queen
butterscotch fantasy
honey milk ecstasy
curvy soft delicacy
opened door galaxy
let me worship every inch of you
till your sweet nectar
pools into my hands
begging for release
i am all you need
close your eyes...
see me
feel me
taste me
breathe me
envelop me
we are one
brown sugar queen
butterscotch fantasy
honey milk ecstasy
curvy soft delicacy
opened door galaxy
let me worship every inch of you
till your sweet nectar
pools into my hands
begging for release
i am all you need
close your eyes...
see me
feel me
taste me
breathe me
envelop me
we are one
Published 22nd Jun 2018
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22nd Jun 2018 5:47am
22nd Jun 2018 6:54am
I like poems like this that make black beautiful (have written a few here myself). Love the adjectives in these lines:
brown sugar queen
butterscotch fantasy
honey milk ecstasy
curvy soft delicacy
opened door galaxy
brown sugar queen
butterscotch fantasy
honey milk ecstasy
curvy soft delicacy
opened door galaxy
22nd Jun 2018 12:25pm
Love love love this ... especially "opened door galaxy" ... "pools into my hand" ... then the relentless closing climax ...
22nd Jun 2018 6:14pm
Why do we talk of sweetness when speaking of the vulva?. When the luscious flavours are so savoury? I like this poem and put it on my list but need to ask the question Is the male less erotic .... .... .... Ask the ladies.Kexby
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