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Love(:
Love, that thing I want one day.
That feeling I desire and so need.
Not those words people have to say.
And the bull shit people feed.
I want that tingle in my tummy.. Butterflies.
The heart skipping a beat and sweaty hands.
My heart getting put in knots and ties.
My mind soaring with thoughts of them to a magical land.
Love, that feeling of fitting in.
A sense that I actually belong.
To have that person to make love with and it not be a sin.
Love, it's the thing I'm forelonging.
Not the kind of love that results in hate.
I've never felt actual love.
I hope it'll happen one day, like fate.
I wonder if that love will be enough.
Love.. Will it make me happy?
Will it make me never want to let that person go?
Inspire me to write a poem? No matter how corny or sappy?
Will I be able to see it or will their love not show?
Love, its a four letter word.
Its the one thing I always dream about.
I just want to put my life in fast forward.
Because, the love I want.. I know it'll eventually count.
That feeling I desire and so need.
Not those words people have to say.
And the bull shit people feed.
I want that tingle in my tummy.. Butterflies.
The heart skipping a beat and sweaty hands.
My heart getting put in knots and ties.
My mind soaring with thoughts of them to a magical land.
Love, that feeling of fitting in.
A sense that I actually belong.
To have that person to make love with and it not be a sin.
Love, it's the thing I'm forelonging.
Not the kind of love that results in hate.
I've never felt actual love.
I hope it'll happen one day, like fate.
I wonder if that love will be enough.
Love.. Will it make me happy?
Will it make me never want to let that person go?
Inspire me to write a poem? No matter how corny or sappy?
Will I be able to see it or will their love not show?
Love, its a four letter word.
Its the one thing I always dream about.
I just want to put my life in fast forward.
Because, the love I want.. I know it'll eventually count.
Published 19th Oct 2011
| Edited 27th Oct 2011
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....so much of what you wrote here. Eternal, never fleeting and just it's presence brings about real joy. Love is who we are and what we are truly made of deep down inside. So, as the group, "Atlantic Starr" penned way back in the 80's, "When love calls, you better answer. It just might be a big mistake if you try to hesitate.
When love calls, you better answer. Don't let it slip away too many times; it just might not ever come again....."
I like this poem : )
When love calls, you better answer. Don't let it slip away too many times; it just might not ever come again....."
I like this poem : )
4th Nov 2011 00:26am
19th Oct 2011 8:41pm
4 da Love dat u say u desire
a Love dat wil surely inspire
a Love dat wil spark tru passions fire
a Love dat wil neva eva retire
a Love between u & a non-liar
if dats wut u want den build it With God....He Is All u wil require....;)
a Love dat wil surely inspire
a Love dat wil spark tru passions fire
a Love dat wil neva eva retire
a Love between u & a non-liar
if dats wut u want den build it With God....He Is All u wil require....;)
19th Oct 2011 8:44pm
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