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poet to poet
write for me a love poem
born of intrigue
let desire show you the secrets
I hide inside me
walk in my hidden gardens
they bear flowers of passion
yes I'm thinking of you as I write this
dear poet
you leave an echo, a soul print
every time I read you
you make a difference
that's lasting
your vibe is heavy
with a powerful flavor
nothing else would even make a ripple
on my lake of consciousness
but you did
so I thought i would write you
dear poet
no I'm not trying to seduce
just one poet to another
you affect me
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Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 3:50pm
Wonderful poeting my poetess ... so beautiful ... expressing what I oft feel in my heart ... captured perfectly ... as only you can do ...
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 3:53pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly your poem Pale Masque inspired me deeply after I started pondering how you and other poets affect me..
I cherish your visits you gift me smiles :)
love Brenda
I cherish your visits you gift me smiles :)
love Brenda
Re. poet to poet
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 3:54pm
Brenda...Love love love this write!
I think LDF's comment sums it up perfectly....so i'll shut up right about now :)
Ben xoxoxx
I think LDF's comment sums it up perfectly....so i'll shut up right about now :)
Ben xoxoxx
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 3:55pm
aw thank you dearest Ben big smiles on my face
i'm so happy you're feeling this one :)
love Brenda
i'm so happy you're feeling this one :)
love Brenda
Re. poet to poet
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 3:55pm
Beautiful. I hope this challenge doesn't go unheard dear poetess. Love and light to you. J
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 5:12pm
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:07pm
Who wouldn't be honoured to accept such a challenge? I know I would be. J. xx
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 6:31pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis you are a poet who makes ripples in my sacred lake..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 7:01pm
Thank you sweet poetess. Very honoured indeed. You will have your poem. This i promise on my honour. Enchanted. J. xxx
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 7:04pm
aw thank you dearest Juvenalis i'm deeply moved by the beauty of your soul..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 3:56pm
Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 5:13pm
thank you dearest Lawrence I love talking to the readers directly in my writes.. happy you felt this one..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 4:15pm
Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 5:15pm
thank you Tim yes the poets here are my inspiration away from here I don't usually write.. yes ideas formulate at times though it's usually sitting in these sacred halls that i'm inspired by the energy..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 6:35pm
For the sheer joy of feeling the beauty and loving it for what it is. Beautiful poetry, lovely Dark Angel. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 6:45pm
thank you beautiful Willow you make not only ripples but gentle waves on my lake..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 9:58pm
Dear Crimsin,
This is an extremely beautiful poem. It touches the heart and feelings by your choice of words and images.
This is an extremely beautiful poem. It touches the heart and feelings by your choice of words and images.
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Re: Re. poet to poet
11th Jun 2018 10:04pm
thank you graciously dearest Joseph for such a beautiful comment..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. poet to poet
Anonymous
11th Jun 2018 11:43pm
My love - such a lovely tribute to a fellow poet - we all inspire and affect each other, leaving thoughts to ponder and imprints branded...you have expressed that beautifully here...
I love you madly
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
I love you madly
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. poet to poet
12th Jun 2018 00:02am
thank you my love I think we all inspire in our own way one another.. your lovely waves are always felt..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
I love you passionately..
love Brenda