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5th Jun 2018 7:08am
5th Jun 2018 7:08am
I love this sort of poem. I think it works pretty well but the elipses are too much. I would consider dropping all the punctuation (including Caps) and letting the words do the work.
5th Jun 2018 3:23pm
Translating paperand ink to type is annoying at best...
But your advice is sound so I will take your suggestion under advisement, as they say
and re-work the work for a look-see.
Many thanks for the input
But your advice is sound so I will take your suggestion under advisement, as they say
and re-work the work for a look-see.
Many thanks for the input
