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Joy Of Living
Awakened with gratitude
The greatest of attitudes
Restored and released
Encouraged and increased
No fear of losing
The Source is choosing
Each moment is a gift
Stand up and uplift
The true prize is in giving
Realize the joy of living
The greatest of attitudes
Restored and released
Encouraged and increased
No fear of losing
The Source is choosing
Each moment is a gift
Stand up and uplift
The true prize is in giving
Realize the joy of living
Published 5th Jun 2018
Author's Note
I wrote this as a morning motivation and mood
lifter . Love and light to all who read .
lifter . Love and light to all who read .
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5th Jun 2018 4:03pm
Hi Miz Steph... I really like each thought you placed upon the page... but, as I read your lines, my brain re-arranged them. May I be so bold as to suggest that your inspiring words might be even more so with a little shuffling? So, without further ado...for your perusal:
Awakened with gratitude
Restored and released
The greatest of attitudes
Encouraged and increased
No fear of losing
Each moment is a gift
The source is in choosing
Stand up and uplift
The true prize is in giving
The Joy Of Living. (If it still works for you, I would remove 'Realize')
Awakened with gratitude
Restored and released
The greatest of attitudes
Encouraged and increased
No fear of losing
Each moment is a gift
The source is in choosing
Stand up and uplift
The true prize is in giving
The Joy Of Living. (If it still works for you, I would remove 'Realize')
6th Jun 2018 3:00am
6th Jun 2018 3:30am
