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Umbrella
Reigns of
hypocrisy puts
teeth on edge
Creating
Spinning swirls of
holy terror
Sending
Prismatic slate's spiraling
through empty void's
Timorously searching
Till finally
discovering
Utter perfection
Under their
umbrella of
protection
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Re. Umbrella
27th May 2018 1:12pm
Hope you don’t take this wrong, but I couldn’t help but think of that rihanna song 😁
Really liked the read. Thanks for sharing.
Really liked the read. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Umbrella
27th May 2018 1:21pm
Hello DevilsChild, so good to see an old friend grace my page and no, no offense taken however I never thought of that yet I do like the song. So happy to know you enjoyed it though lol! Many appreciations for the words you've left and for reading.
Much Respect,
Survivor 🌈
Much Respect,
Survivor 🌈
Re. Umbrella
27th May 2018 8:37pm
beautiful Survivor
a full journey realized
inside this brilliant write..
love Crim
a full journey realized
inside this brilliant write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Umbrella
27th May 2018 8:47pm
Hey Crimson, so good to see you grace my page again. Thank you for such high praise, coming from a Poetess whom I deeply respect not to mention a superb skill sets yourself, jackknifes me beyond the moon's. Yes quite the journey indeed, as you yourself also knows and has traveled. Many appreciations for all your kindnesses, especially the words you have left behind. Much love and mad mad respect,
me
me
Re: Re. Umbrella
27th May 2018 8:59pm
aw beautiful Survivor you honor me greatly i'm blushing.. I firmly believe each of us are deeply and uniquely needed for each other on this journey..
we are connected soul to soul through our writes..
your poetic light shines :)
love Crim
we are connected soul to soul through our writes..
your poetic light shines :)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Umbrella
I like to believe we are sister's and brother's in arm's, me, a mere
survivor surviving survival 👣!
I am the one who is honored, wanna wrestle for it lol?
°~°
survivor surviving survival 👣!
I am the one who is honored, wanna wrestle for it lol?
°~°
Re. Umbrella
28th May 2018 3:29am
I see the dynamics of resistance and acceptance. Both are present in the offerings of the group.
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Re: Re. Umbrella
28th May 2018 8:42am
Hey there Poetry, so good to see another good friend grace my page. Yes too both however now I'm quite settled into the why's of it all. Thank you so much for reading, understanding and better yet, leaving such beautiful words behind. Many appreciations for all your many kindnesses, much love and mad mad respect,
Survivor
Survivor
Re: Re. Umbrella
28th May 2018 6:40pm
Re. Umbrella
28th May 2018 9:12am
i really like this .. an interesting way with words. which i very much enjoyed
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Re: Re. Umbrella
28th May 2018 4:18pm
Hello there Daffodil, I do so love the puzzle pieces that are mere word's waiting to be solved. I know... I know...
Many appreciations for gracing my page and leaving the gift of word's behind. Much love and respect,
SURVIVOR 👣🚬
Many appreciations for gracing my page and leaving the gift of word's behind. Much love and respect,
SURVIVOR 👣🚬