Cuming Once, Cuming Twice, Oooh How Nice!

i can hear wen panties drop
& i inspire pussy 2 pop
& im kuntry so my fav sound is slop
it sounds like suckn spit wen u let ur jaw drop
& dis is no rap but i Love 2 hip hop
listen 2 moans & groans & a lotta "boy dont stops"
& big tits cuz i likes a phat top
& im 2 big 2 cut so i chop
dis skinny man jus got a good crop
& im out but ur poem was riden like its on top....;)

My Pussy can hold it's own
It's up to you to make me moan & groan

I'm not your typical girl
I'm like a sneaky squirrel
I will steal your nut
Make you wanna cum in my butt

Although, that's not my style
I just wanted to make you smile
But if you want to go that extra mile
I will bend over and crack a smile

Yes, you have to lick it
before you stick it

It's your fault you got me so sprung
My pussy is throbbing for your tongue

Now I have my ass all in your face
Waiting for you to take me to my favorite place

Climax Island here I cum
This man's loving is yummy yum yum!

*I REALLY ENJOYED YOUR COMMENT*!  THX.  :)

i enjoyed da words about ur grind
& i lic a hole lot betta dan i can rhyme
& im goodest...not like da rest
& between thighs im tryn 2 b ur best
& i can go dat xxxtra mile like kuntry roads
im a kuntry boy & i carry good loads
& wen ur redy den try me next
i wil take ur body beyond da rhelms of sex....;)

I'm impressed! I like your choice of words. Just like a Country Man, no sugar coating. ;)

.......when you begin to package things, how different the picture becomes.  When I first read this, I said "well this has some good meat in it.  Desire for sensual and sexual pleasure and a sincere *jonz* for her man's *bone* that makes it a good read.  Kinda' thought the dialogue was a bit "rudimentary".  Then I read the exchange between you and my man Goodest. (You two collab well together btw) The two of you flow almost like we used to do in the hey day of hip-hop. Spittin' rhyme back and forth, challenging each others words.  That was some good stuff.  I've come to the conclusion (especially since you've posted a pic-yeaaaa) that your delivery was intentional-and decidedly with a southern country kinda' Nelly flava'-even some 95 south blending towards a Outkast kinda ATL thang.  Kinda' tongue-in-cheek-almost character like and if that's the way you meant it, that was great.  I believe there's a seriously great writer underneath these words here.  This was just a cover-waiting on the right moment to "drop that bass" on all of us.  LOL  Loved your poem.  Made me wish I was your man but..........

..........your reply to Mr. Goodest was stronger in charecter than your original.  In that answer, I feel like the real Chocolate drop is trying come out and we all better look out for "Da' Queen"

This is going in my like file.  good stuff.

Wow! Thanks so much for the feedback. You practically read me like a book. Yes, the real Chocolate Drop is trying to come out.  
I must admit that i surprised myself with my reply to Mr. Goodest.
 

This piece was hot.

Look forward to seeing more of your work.

THANK YOU FOR THE WELCOME, AS WELL AS THE COMMENT.

I PLAN TO POST MORE OF MY WORK SOON.

wow..this  is cool

THANKS!

I HOPE YOU ENJOY THE REST OF MY WORK! :)

Even today this piece has a most heated effect. I can only wonder what it does to the fellow mentioned.

Thanks. It makes him cum.🤭