In Sheep's Clothing

Insightful, well-structured and strange. All of your work has some credit, but you've most definitely come one hell of a long way since you first started publishing on this site. The 'wings of mediocrity' and 'sheep's clothing doesn't fit' lines are fantastic.

Thank you! I appreciate all feedback but hearing that from you makes me feel fantastic. I've got alot of draft stuff at the moment, i'm just trying to work it all together.
'Wings of mediocrity' was my favourite line, I'm glad you picked it out.

with Jack - "The 'wings of mediocrity' and 'sheep's clothing doesn't fit' lines are fantastic."
They were also my favourite lines in the poem. This is short but gets straight to the point & shows how the persona doesn't blend in with society. Love it :)

Thank you. Sometimes all I want is to be one of the sheep, but it's just not destined to happen :-P

I am a wolf
whos sheeps clothing
doesn't fit.

Damn, that line is deep. Good sahit