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Takane

Beautiful flower on a lofty peak
A level higher is what you seek
Where the sparrows soar up high
My basal presence is just benign
I extend my hands as if I were close
A mirage, a selfish, delusional prose
Still, I gaze up above
Inspired by the presence that deeply touch me

The path you took up I cannot comprehend
Bring forward my desire to ascend
Never knew life was amiss
Fairweathered, blown by wind
As I am a dandilion, just a weed
Growing slowly, a sprouting seed
Still, your exposure calls forth
A wind that blows me uptrend

Someday I would love..
To see the scenery only you can see
To hear the sounds only you can hear
And share the moments to share...
With the world
Written by Atmos (Juri Ogita)
Published
Author's Note
The title “Takane” means “a high place” in Japanese.
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