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Dark Eyes
My dark eyes draw you in, as do my lips,
Now I've slipped from my chair; I've crawled across
To please you with my mouth: the moment slips
By gracefully, but it will not be lost,
Being bounded by fingers beckoning,
And the connection of your flesh to mine:
Pre-cum mixed with spit is just the thing
To base a cocktail on - a taste divine
That will not disappear until the cock,
Which fills my face, is ready to rejoice,
And spurt its need, while my lips gently lock
Themselves around your pole; then you give voice
To satisfaction, with soft, grunted sighs,
As soft lips draw you in (and my dark eyes).
Now I've slipped from my chair; I've crawled across
To please you with my mouth: the moment slips
By gracefully, but it will not be lost,
Being bounded by fingers beckoning,
And the connection of your flesh to mine:
Pre-cum mixed with spit is just the thing
To base a cocktail on - a taste divine
That will not disappear until the cock,
Which fills my face, is ready to rejoice,
And spurt its need, while my lips gently lock
Themselves around your pole; then you give voice
To satisfaction, with soft, grunted sighs,
As soft lips draw you in (and my dark eyes).
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Re. Dark Eyes
10th May 2018 2:21am
In such matters, it is all about the eyes. You have done it again (awkwardly shifting to conceal his reaction).
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Re: Re. Dark Eyes
10th May 2018 6:33am
Looks up and at you
blushes faintly, hearing praise
that leave her well filled
blushes faintly, hearing praise
that leave her well filled
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10th May 2018 6:33am
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11th May 2018 1:24pm
It always should in my view sir - feelings, senses and contexts fill the act with meaning - or steal the meaning from the act alternatively
Re. Dark Eyes
24th May 2018 9:15pm
"Not my cup of Tea"... (content)
That said... Very Well Done, and beautifully written, besides.
I like the way you tied it all together with the last line. Kudos
That said... Very Well Done, and beautifully written, besides.
I like the way you tied it all together with the last line. Kudos
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