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Outbuilding
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Seeding the garden with evenings
A predicted landslide for the sky
Loving this danger...
The real danger of evil people slipping into the lawn
Dandelion leaves...
Leaving them powerless
Contemplative ...
I am well aware that I am an outbuilding...
I am a superheroe, a readout from computer screens.
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Published 9th May 2018
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9th May 2018 2:15am
17th May 2018 1:42am
Please lose that e on hero! This is so advanced. . .it's almost data-like. As though a computer wrote a poem. 💻
Dandelions have their purpose. At least, according to the bees. 🐝
Dandelions have their purpose. At least, according to the bees. 🐝
I like your criticism, Ahavati. But it is not so advanced.
Superhero ... I drop that e... and it becomes e-...
Contemplative intrigue..
Contemplative ... Microsoft Windows.
The borderless realm of Microsoft Windows makes me an angel.
I undergo a transfiguration... I turn into that *outbuilding* which is like a creepy mobile surveillance tower.
Dandelion leaves... are a metaphor for defense and/or counter-attack.
Dandelion leaves attack the weed.
(You get me, Ahavati?)
... ... ... ...
Superhero ... I drop that e... and it becomes e-...
Contemplative intrigue..
Contemplative ... Microsoft Windows.
The borderless realm of Microsoft Windows makes me an angel.
I undergo a transfiguration... I turn into that *outbuilding* which is like a creepy mobile surveillance tower.
Dandelion leaves... are a metaphor for defense and/or counter-attack.
Dandelion leaves attack the weed.
(You get me, Ahavati?)
... ... ... ...
