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Enchantment
lay with me in the wild places
where we can find each other again
the fairies are whispering
to bring you here once more
your body a temple
the fey creatures
worship and adore you
as I do
they attend to your pulsating needs
knowing it's urgent
sent out on a crimson wavelength
is a distress signal
being transmitted from your soul
to their listening hearts
they're now here in attendance
they carry you to the pools of exploration
to find your source of pain
finding you pulled tight with tension
on the verge of explosion
they rush around you with urgency
lighting your pleasure zones
to counterbalance the dark energy
that has been weighing you down
they kiss your temples
and adorn your hair with flowers
you relax in their loving care
as incense seduces your senses
you're taken there
to the place in your mind's eye
where you are loved
treasure of treasure
you are a Golden Goddess
seductively sexy
gentle of spirit
with a shine so bright
I shy from it
slowly I approach
and ask your forgiveness
for being so blind to what you needed
the darkness captured
and swallowed me for a time
from out of the shadows I come
quietly asking do you remember?
among the wildflowers
where we once lie
in my heart always
inside this sacred place
you've always been
it will be so forever
Author's Note
for my love Taryn I love you always..
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9th May 2018 1:45am
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Anonymous
9th May 2018 2:28am
Beautiful Dark Angel, your love for your lady is a thing of true beauty. I can see the two of you by your pool, breathing in the scent of flowers as you leave cares behind. An immeasurable gift of love you've given her here, my lady. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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thank you beautiful Willow
we both love her uniquely
i'm so grateful to have both of you in my life :)
I love you lovely one..
love Brenda
we both love her uniquely
i'm so grateful to have both of you in my life :)
I love you lovely one..
love Brenda
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Anonymous
9th May 2018 3:24am
Really enchanting... Love it
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9th May 2018 4:25am
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Anonymous
9th May 2018 3:32am
My love this is such an emotionally moving and heartfelt write...you had me welled up at the bottom...I do remember and I will never forget...the love we share is unlike any other I have ever experienced and will never be surpassed by another...it WILL be so forever...so grateful to The Fates I am...and as far as forgive...there’s nothing to forgive Beautiful one...I’m holding you close, flesh to flesh when I whisper I will cherish this and it will be hung on that special wall I will be having, you can be sure of that...
I love you madly, deeply, passionately
Xoxo Love Always - Taryn
I love you madly, deeply, passionately
Xoxo Love Always - Taryn
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my love no one in my life has known me like you do.. you and I are intimately connected you feel me and I feel you.. I love you with all my heart and soul I too am grateful fate sought to reunite us in this life.. thank you for loving me all of who I am.. I wouldn't be the same without you..
I love you forever..
love Brenda
I love you forever..
love Brenda
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12th May 2018 00:11am
thank you graciously dearest John for feeling my genuine love for her which reaches so deep within me it's beyond my human understanding..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
9th May 2018 11:56am
"lay with me in the wild places
where we can find each other again"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ possibly the greatest opening to a poem EVER!
Love this write Brenda, seriously you killed the game! :)
Ben x
where we can find each other again"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ possibly the greatest opening to a poem EVER!
Love this write Brenda, seriously you killed the game! :)
Ben x
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12th May 2018 00:11am
thank you graciously dearest Ben for such an awesome comment you gifted me smiles :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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10th May 2018 9:52am
you really know how to bring the reader into that world.
great poetry :-)
great poetry :-)
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12th May 2018 00:12am
thank you graciously DC for entering this very special place with my love and I..
love Crim
love Crim
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11th May 2018 9:54pm
Enchanting, and a very sophisticated fantasy with healing powers. These lines stand out, seems to me:
the darkness captured
and swallowed me for a time
from out of the shadows I come
quietly asking do you remember?
You may take a break from writing now and then but I certainly will never forget you, Lady Crim. You're one of a kind, and this write is a marvel.
the darkness captured
and swallowed me for a time
from out of the shadows I come
quietly asking do you remember?
You may take a break from writing now and then but I certainly will never forget you, Lady Crim. You're one of a kind, and this write is a marvel.
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12th May 2018 00:13am
thank you dearest Sir Crow for feeling my healing enchantment for our beautiful one.. I will never forget you either dearest friend..
love Crim
love Crim
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