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"Torment"
For the tormented sole
When there is nothing
Pain and suffering only
no tangible opposition
Knowing more turmoil
less joy, and optimism
One of such that endures
first lessons not of wisdom
Lonesome, hardship
endured, overcome
Strength may become
equal chance of wicked
When there is nothing
Pain and suffering only
no tangible opposition
Knowing more turmoil
less joy, and optimism
One of such that endures
first lessons not of wisdom
Lonesome, hardship
endured, overcome
Strength may become
equal chance of wicked
Published 3rd May 2018
Author's Note
Enduring hardship from childhood there is likely two outcomes: Wisdom, and perseverance, or wickedness and tenacity.
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
3rd May 2018 9:25am
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3rd May 2018 9:41am
Thanks, Melia, I will never cease to appreciate your kindness.
Though most of my works are from reflections of past, that I relive through an entranced state of recollection.
I try to relive the events, in order to recreate and describe them.
Usually I happen upon a feeling throughout the day, then relive the most intense version of such.
You are right though, I need to watch myself over critiquing Me (Heh, I have a tendency of doing so).
Though most of my works are from reflections of past, that I relive through an entranced state of recollection.
I try to relive the events, in order to recreate and describe them.
Usually I happen upon a feeling throughout the day, then relive the most intense version of such.
You are right though, I need to watch myself over critiquing Me (Heh, I have a tendency of doing so).
