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Naked
I stand before you
naked
vulnerable to your words
your charms
naked
wanting to believe what you say
the feelings you stir inside me
naked
in my wantonness for you
in my desire to have you close
naked
I want you to see what you do to me
see my body respond to your words
to your hands and lips as they touch me
yes my love
I want to be naked for you
everything laid bare for you to see
really see me
Naked.
naked
vulnerable to your words
your charms
naked
wanting to believe what you say
the feelings you stir inside me
naked
in my wantonness for you
in my desire to have you close
naked
I want you to see what you do to me
see my body respond to your words
to your hands and lips as they touch me
yes my love
I want to be naked for you
everything laid bare for you to see
really see me
Naked.
Published 29th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Went to my favorite spot on the beach and this is what my muse found! I hope you enjoy🌹
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29th Apr 2018 2:06am
29th Apr 2018 2:36am
Mmmm yes, but even more so as an adult ...to give yourself, show your heart to another is scary!
Always
~M~
Always
~M~
29th Apr 2018 2:10am
your naked truth is titillating and beguiling....mesmerizing visions for a rainy evening...absolutely wonderful reading...
29th Apr 2018 2:44am
29th Apr 2018 2:34am
29th Apr 2018 2:45am
29th Apr 2018 6:10am
Very nice. It's quite a full-on poem; having that air of intimacy about it & the fact that you seem fully engaged in your endeavor to be seen laid bare before your expectant lover.
29th Apr 2018 8:15pm
30th Apr 2018 6:28am
30th Apr 2018 8:51pm
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
1st May 2018 11:48am
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