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My Heathcliff Romeo's Ghost

Here we are
Faces in feathers,
Smothered in pleasure...
Dark eyes thief carats of the Sky
Christening the burden of maturity,
with boundless light...
Happy deformity scarred in your smile
Paralyzed with joy I lay,
Fear of the lust that makes haste
Faith,being flaked away
like crusted blood on tile,
A shapeless ashtray...
When around me?
Your body betrays the words you don't say
To your powerless dismay,
Like a snitch
Granted with immunity,
Smug & sated,unabashedly.
SE. P.4.27.18

Written by SeaEntity1

Published 28th Apr 2018

#love #scary #utopia

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Re. My Heathcliff Romeo's Ghost

flowergirl

28th Apr 2018 2:56am

Hey Sea......this is brilliantly crafted........catchy title....... dry unique lines thru out........enjoyed this very much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

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SeaEntity1

28th Apr 2018 3:05am

Thanks lady! hugs n kisses!

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Re. My Heathcliff Romeo's Ghost

SURVIVOR

28th Apr 2018 1:33pm

Deeply soft, the gentle softness between your words leaving images of forlorn lovers discovering passions warmth of love, tangled up while adrift atop sky's pillowy comfort learning the art of let go as slow acceptance of give in prepares them for the long journey ahead, I may be off but the images leave me picturing the beautiful rawness of give and take so many eventually lose. Love the words of new lovers learning the ways of each. I adore your description of sorrows tragic gift of smile, beautifully done Sea, much love Deep Deep Respect,
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