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Blinking and Thinking
China revelations shatter
Shards graze my eye
Bleed with realization
Salt crumbs slowly rub by
I am susceptible to temptation
A victim of Influence
Moral compass cracked &
Subtly flawed .
Seaentity2018.
Shards graze my eye
Bleed with realization
Salt crumbs slowly rub by
I am susceptible to temptation
A victim of Influence
Moral compass cracked &
Subtly flawed .
Seaentity2018.
Published 27th Apr 2018
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27th Apr 2018 8:59pm
Short lines ... crisp line breaks ... a tease of rhyme ... bravo dear poet
27th Apr 2018 9:02pm
27th Apr 2018 9:16pm
Your word choice. So on spot, creating panes of imagery. Very powerful and raw, punches the plexus, i love brutal honesty in between your words giving even more depth. Excellent work my friend, Much love and Deep Deep Respect,
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27th Apr 2018 9:23pm
