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When It Rains
Once the sun sets and the stars come out
I hear this incredible calling
Their presence in the dark eases my doubts
I feel like I’m flying instead of falling.
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When it rains, I feel so clean
As if the water is cleansing my very soul
The grass is a vibrant shade of green
And for the first time I feel whole.
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Once the sun rises and the stars go to sleep
I feel this incredible yearning
The one who holds my heart is a yes to keep
The passion within me is forever burning.
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When it rains, I feel so clean
As if the water is cleansing my very soul
The grass is a vibrant shade of green
And for the first time I feel whole.
Rain, rain come on down,
Lull me to sleep with your peaceful sound;
When the sun comes out,
I’ll be feeling better; I will have no doubts.
So drench me, purify me,
Don’t be so shy, come and make me clean.
Rain, rain come on down,
Fill up my empty spirit so my worries will drown.
I hear this incredible calling
Their presence in the dark eases my doubts
I feel like I’m flying instead of falling.
-
When it rains, I feel so clean
As if the water is cleansing my very soul
The grass is a vibrant shade of green
And for the first time I feel whole.
-
Once the sun rises and the stars go to sleep
I feel this incredible yearning
The one who holds my heart is a yes to keep
The passion within me is forever burning.
-
When it rains, I feel so clean
As if the water is cleansing my very soul
The grass is a vibrant shade of green
And for the first time I feel whole.
Rain, rain come on down,
Lull me to sleep with your peaceful sound;
When the sun comes out,
I’ll be feeling better; I will have no doubts.
So drench me, purify me,
Don’t be so shy, come and make me clean.
Rain, rain come on down,
Fill up my empty spirit so my worries will drown.
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Re. When It Rains
26th Apr 2018 10:14pm
wow the words just fit in perfectly in the lines and it all flows perfectly without flaws...
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Re. When It Rains
26th Apr 2018 10:49pm
I love a good long steady rain ... no T-storms ... this evokes such wonderful memories ... thanks my sweet poetess
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26th Apr 2018 10:56pm
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
26th Apr 2018 10:55pm
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Re. When It Rains
26th Apr 2018 11:14pm
Re. When It Rains
26th Apr 2018 11:38pm
water has memory...how we feel about water affects its molecular structure...water is alive...water gives life...I love your connection and be assured water knows how you feel about it....Lawrence
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Re. When It Rains
27th Apr 2018 5:36pm
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
27th Apr 2018 6:07pm
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