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Naima
John Coltrane playing as I zone out
Slow dancing as the sun sets
Imagining us hand in hand
ocean waves changing the texture of sand
Slowly hypnotizing me with your deep gaze
Our bodies connecting I feel a gentle graze
Closer and deeper you pull me in
Warm island breeze hair blowing in the wind
Cheek to cheek unable to part
Hypnotizing me with the sound of your heart
As night sets in and the stars appear
You twirl me around than pull me near
Gently undressing you one button at a time
Totally enamored with thoughts of you being mine
The touch of your skin is what I crave
Wanting nothing more than to become your love slave
Two bodies lost at sea you are the only company I desire or need to feel complete
Slow dancing as the sun sets
Imagining us hand in hand
ocean waves changing the texture of sand
Slowly hypnotizing me with your deep gaze
Our bodies connecting I feel a gentle graze
Closer and deeper you pull me in
Warm island breeze hair blowing in the wind
Cheek to cheek unable to part
Hypnotizing me with the sound of your heart
As night sets in and the stars appear
You twirl me around than pull me near
Gently undressing you one button at a time
Totally enamored with thoughts of you being mine
The touch of your skin is what I crave
Wanting nothing more than to become your love slave
Two bodies lost at sea you are the only company I desire or need to feel complete
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26th Apr 2018 4:21pm
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26th Apr 2018 4:27pm
Beautiful! I needed a peaceful thought right now. You have perfect timing. I’ll be listening to Coltrane for the rest of the day!
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26th Apr 2018 11:29pm
Very Nice , Mi' Lady Nick11 !
I grew up in my late teens , early 1970's , on John And Mahavishnu Orchestra...
Later , about 77 - 78 , I lived in the Arizona desert , at a Hot Springs Community ,
called Healing Waters...our gatekeeper , who greeted everyone , with a "Welcome Home "
would rise before sunrise , and greet the sun , by jazz singing , and jazzed up Krishna
chants ; He used to sing with Alice Coltrane , and knew John...
Perhaps you will like this...
https://www.mixcloud.com/mol_/all-that-jazz-3-nina-simone-alice-coltrane-sun-ra-olu-dara-charlie-parker-yusef-lateef-povo/
I grew up in my late teens , early 1970's , on John And Mahavishnu Orchestra...
Later , about 77 - 78 , I lived in the Arizona desert , at a Hot Springs Community ,
called Healing Waters...our gatekeeper , who greeted everyone , with a "Welcome Home "
would rise before sunrise , and greet the sun , by jazz singing , and jazzed up Krishna
chants ; He used to sing with Alice Coltrane , and knew John...
Perhaps you will like this...
https://www.mixcloud.com/mol_/all-that-jazz-3-nina-simone-alice-coltrane-sun-ra-olu-dara-charlie-parker-yusef-lateef-povo/
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Anonymous
27th Apr 2018 2:31pm
Great romantic lines beautiful
I dig Coltrane and miles Davis...
Funny was listening to sketches of Spain Lol two days ago
I dig Coltrane and miles Davis...
Funny was listening to sketches of Spain Lol two days ago
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Re. Naima
27th Apr 2018 3:30pm
You had me at John Coltrane ;) but I love this line:Imagining us hand in hand
ocean waves changing the texture of sand
ocean waves changing the texture of sand
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Re. Naima
27th Apr 2018 3:38pm
Yes yes yes....but now I crave to be on a beach somewhere! Just to smell and feel the water and sun on my face....ah I guess this will have to do :)
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27th Apr 2018 3:46pm
I love the smell of the ocean and the grit of sand on my skin best form of exfoliation lol
Super relaxing
Super relaxing
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