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in my dreams
You found me
And you set me free
I fear nothing now
So never release me
A desire so pure that angels hide their faces
But now it takes my breath away
Each word you write
To find you only in my sleep
Where I hold you so close
I feel safe in your embrace
But know you are not real
And you set me free
I fear nothing now
So never release me
A desire so pure that angels hide their faces
But now it takes my breath away
Each word you write
To find you only in my sleep
Where I hold you so close
I feel safe in your embrace
But know you are not real
Published 25th Apr 2018
Author's Note
Sometimes you find something, desire it, want it, but know it will never be
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Aww, that's rather sad. An imaginary lover. I'm sure your dreams will come true one day & at least you are getting some creativity out of it. I really did think up until the last few lines that you were writing about a new soulmate that saved you from your fears. Nice write & welcome my friend. :-)
25th Apr 2018 7:11am
It feels like every line is pulling against the line before it. Good poem and welcome to DU.
