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Sunlight and You
The air around me feels lighter
Scents of nature are welcoming
Eyes closed facing the heavens
Sunlight refracted against my lids
Sets me to dreaming
Of a lifetime with you
Arms encircling
Soft lips touching Two hearts beating as one.
Published 23rd Apr 2018
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23rd Apr 2018 10:02pm
Smooth write ... like how right justified Two hearts ... also like the mix of short lines and crisp line breaks ... my fav
23rd Apr 2018 10:05pm
Aww thank you sug!!
I really appreciate you giving me some of your valuable time 🌹
I really appreciate you giving me some of your valuable time 🌹
23rd Apr 2018 10:07pm
My pleasure ... your poetry goes great with my mango smoothie and the infinity pool ...
23rd Apr 2018 10:08pm
23rd Apr 2018 11:16pm
24th Apr 2018 1:41am
It’s a blessing to me to have found this site and to meet some of the massive talent here. In saying that, your reviews are one of the few I look for each time I post!
Thank you🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Thank you🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
24th Apr 2018 00:46am
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24th Apr 2018 1:44am
Hello again, John.
Once my muse takes over I am just holding the pen :)
I thank you for giving me a touch of your time 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Once my muse takes over I am just holding the pen :)
I thank you for giving me a touch of your time 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
24th Apr 2018 00:57am
I agree with everyone. Two hearts, two bodies..should always become one.
Beautifully done as usual, dear
Beautifully done as usual, dear
24th Apr 2018 1:46am
Thank you sweetie for stopping by and giving this old gal this much appreciated review 🌹
Always
Justafan
~M~
Always
Justafan
~M~
24th Apr 2018 1:45am
24th Apr 2018 5:54am
The edit on here was crazy! I tried so many times ... even starting over from scratch but nothing worked!!
Sorry
Sorry
24th Apr 2018 6:42pm
24th Apr 2018 6:52pm
