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Love You (More)
I love you more than bacon
A martini left unshaken
Please don't be mistaken
I love my milk a shaken
I just love you more
I love you more than ice cream
A bucket full of Jim Beam
It gives me such a strange dream
Love Gran's Chicken Supreme
I just love you more
I love Scottish champ Andy Murray
A bowl of Scottish curry
My haggis shaved not furry
I love a McDonald's McFlurry
I just love you more
I love you more than Nation, Flag and Queen
And vegetables that are green
And mushrooms if their clean
I'd love a trip in a submarine
I just love you more
I love you more than Bunjee Jumpin
Environmentally antidumpin
To give The Donald a right good thumpin
I love bumper cars and bumpin
I just love you more
I love you more than boiled eggs
I love you more than full beer kegs
I love you more than I love Greggs
I love you more than having legs
I just love you more
I love you more than your daft cat
She's certainly needing squashing flat
I'd only punch it tit for tat
last resort; a baseball bat
I love my 'fuck off!' front door mat
I just love you more
I love your smile, makes my heart sing
If I had a step it would have a spring
To you, no doubt, I'll always cling
For you I would do anything
I love you more than everything
And I just love you more
Note : "Greggs" is the Scottish equivalent of a Taco Bell of bakers. The main reason we have heroin addicts that are obese - to many Pies :-)
Published 22nd Apr 2018
| Edited 28th Dec 2018
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22nd Apr 2018 4:21pm
Aw the softer more loving side of this place is superb. You knocked it outta the park, David. <3
25th Apr 2018 9:08pm
thank you so much, your comment really made me smile gaining warn fuzzies :-))))))))))))))))))))))
22nd Apr 2018 4:39pm
"I love you more than boiled eggs
I love you more than full beer kegs
I love you more than I love Greggs
I love you more than having legs
I just love you more "
Dave...this one brought simultaneous tears...
you're a gem Brother!!
how you mix such depth of serious with humor
is simply beyond my imagination and words..
NBB...your'e lucky!!
I love you more than full beer kegs
I love you more than I love Greggs
I love you more than having legs
I just love you more "
Dave...this one brought simultaneous tears...
you're a gem Brother!!
how you mix such depth of serious with humor
is simply beyond my imagination and words..
NBB...your'e lucky!!
25th Apr 2018 9:09pm
I am so glad this moved you and thank you so much for such positive comments - you are way too kind :-))))))))
22nd Apr 2018 5:23pm
Omg...you guys are so cute! 😄This is absolutely delightful David, great work from your heart!
25th Apr 2018 9:11pm
well she is cute at least (lol)
glad you enjoyed it with such positive comments :-))))))
glad you enjoyed it with such positive comments :-))))))
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2018 5:42pm
Every one of the poems your write for your lovely Nightbird makes me smile so wide. A beautiful, David style love poem! Many many hugs for you both!! :-)
...Willow
...Willow
25th Apr 2018 9:12pm
as always thank you much my dear friend for your constant support :-)))
Huge Massive Hugsssss :-)))))))))))))))
Huge Massive Hugsssss :-)))))))))))))))
23rd Apr 2018 3:05am
I can just hear her saying, "No! I Love you most!" 💕
Love is such a beautiful thing to stand proudly and proclaim openly. If you can't, then something's amiss.
Good offering to the altar of truth, my friend.
Love is such a beautiful thing to stand proudly and proclaim openly. If you can't, then something's amiss.
Good offering to the altar of truth, my friend.
25th Apr 2018 9:14pm
thank you so much - Love without truth is not love :-)
I think she said I love you mostiest x infinity :-)))))
I think she said I love you mostiest x infinity :-)))))
23rd Apr 2018 6:55am
A much enjoyed poem, David. You always bring a smile or a warm feeling with your pieces, this one brought both.
Wishing you both the very best, my friend.
Teri
Wishing you both the very best, my friend.
Teri
25th Apr 2018 9:15pm
always happy to spread some warmth and smiles around - thank you my friend :-)))))))))
Hugssssssssssssssss :-)))))))))))))
Hugssssssssssssssss :-)))))))))))))
24th Apr 2018 9:34pm
Highlander you are a fucking star! My personal favorites:
"My haggis shaved not furry"
"To give The Donald a right good thumpin"
I guess its all about personal preference as you have so eloquently stated brother ;)
......cool fucking rhymes fella!
"My haggis shaved not furry"
"To give The Donald a right good thumpin"
I guess its all about personal preference as you have so eloquently stated brother ;)
......cool fucking rhymes fella!
25th Apr 2018 9:16pm
