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Dawn of Tomorrow
I hear your calling in the wind
And my soul leaps in joy
I feel so warm deep within
When you set the sails and shout “ahoy.”
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The ocean waves are at peace
And the sun lights up my world
The stars guide my voyage across the sea
Your soul is far more precious than any pearl.
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Like the seagulls I cry out loud
As I’m freed from all my sorrow
I stand upon my ship, tall and proud
My hope lies with the dawn of tomorrow.
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After many years we meet at last
Upon the golden sands of a tropical island
Looking into your eyes, a spell has been cast
Those blue orbs outshine any diamond.
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My pain fades with your smile
As my soul sparks to life once more
I’d like to stay here for a while
And walk with you along the Maldivian shore.
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Like the seagulls I cry out loud
As I’m freed from all my sorrow
I stand upon my ship, tall and proud
My hope lies with the dawn of tomorrow.
And my soul leaps in joy
I feel so warm deep within
When you set the sails and shout “ahoy.”
-
The ocean waves are at peace
And the sun lights up my world
The stars guide my voyage across the sea
Your soul is far more precious than any pearl.
-
Like the seagulls I cry out loud
As I’m freed from all my sorrow
I stand upon my ship, tall and proud
My hope lies with the dawn of tomorrow.
-
After many years we meet at last
Upon the golden sands of a tropical island
Looking into your eyes, a spell has been cast
Those blue orbs outshine any diamond.
-
My pain fades with your smile
As my soul sparks to life once more
I’d like to stay here for a while
And walk with you along the Maldivian shore.
-
Like the seagulls I cry out loud
As I’m freed from all my sorrow
I stand upon my ship, tall and proud
My hope lies with the dawn of tomorrow.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 20th Apr 2018
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Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
Oh ... how captivating ... leaving for Costa Rica tomorrow ... this filled me with such happiness. Nice poeting my dear poetess
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21st Apr 2018 00:05am
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Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
21st Apr 2018 00:46am
a warm breeze of rhyme ...loved the imagery...a pleasant interlude...done well....
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Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
21st Apr 2018 4:01am
I really like this. A really beautiful and peaceful piece. Definitely takes me to the beach (one of my favorite places).
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Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
21st Apr 2018 3:15pm
the most tranquil and peaceful piece ive read in a long
thank you for sharing a portion with us now im ready to find some peace of my own :)
thank you for sharing a portion with us now im ready to find some peace of my own :)
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Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
22nd Apr 2018 1:37am
Another remarkable write Lunas . You've a way with expression that is extremely uplifting and does well to transport .
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22nd Apr 2018 1:42am
Thank you, Lord Elrond! I'm glad you've enjoyed it and added it to your reading list, I always try to write uplifting poems.
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25th Apr 2018 10:40pm
Re. Dawn of Tomorrow
26th Apr 2018 3:28am
Very nice ! I hope to stand on my ship , like this one you stand on . Some day , eventually
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26th Apr 2018 3:30am