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Pillow Splotches of Galaxy Noches
Sky...A quilted sea
Of sapphire,violet & Irish cream,
Embroidered by diamond stitches
& Stars sewn in between...
The sky...a quilted sea
Soppy inkwell of nightmares and dreams,
Behold the albino gold silk hemmed in between
Same difference woven from the same spool,
Delicate delusion dusting the air
Perfume around skull caged clouds,
Of stymied supernova prison.
SE.4.14.18.
Of sapphire,violet & Irish cream,
Embroidered by diamond stitches
& Stars sewn in between...
The sky...a quilted sea
Soppy inkwell of nightmares and dreams,
Behold the albino gold silk hemmed in between
Same difference woven from the same spool,
Delicate delusion dusting the air
Perfume around skull caged clouds,
Of stymied supernova prison.
SE.4.14.18.
Published 14th Apr 2018
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14th Apr 2018 10:57pm
What a terrifying cell block I won't even mention the guards or inmates, gives one the shudders... I absolutely love your word choices they are clever, witty and very unique the create a HD vision screen, vivid amps the emotions. Love this however with much sorrow knowing the inspiration behind the imagery. My dearest friend excellent work. Much Love and Mad Mad Respect,
Shadow
Shadow
14th Apr 2018 11:48pm
15th Apr 2018 1:38am
15th Apr 2018 5:03am
I absolutely love "Sky...A quilted sea", very clever creation. You have given the sky a new definition and life. And I love the other wording and brilliant imagery.
"Of sapphire,violet & Irish cream,
Embroidered by diamond stitches
& Stars sewn in between..."-- they are incredibly beautiful.
love
Jasmine
"Of sapphire,violet & Irish cream,
Embroidered by diamond stitches
& Stars sewn in between..."-- they are incredibly beautiful.
love
Jasmine
27th Apr 2018 4:02pm
27th Apr 2018 4:08pm
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- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
22nd Sep 2018 11:55am
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