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Again.

i知 just a boy
Without salvation
Stripped away
Of his innocence
Only to be
Told
he can never dream
Again

i知 just a drain
Completely clogged
With the malicious rain
Of my past inflictions
From the falsely glorified
Whom would adore
To see me demoralized
Again

i知 just an illusion
To help you face
Your self-inflicted seclusion
Until you can see
Your own depth
Only to be discarded
To the past
Again

i知 just a bystander
For the blame
To be placed under
Coinciding
With the sins
Of my melancholy
Only to topple me
Again

i知 just a pleaser
Only looking
To make my life easier
With meaningless and superficial gains
To help separate my mind
From this plane
Only to be trapped within it
Again

i知 just a small heart
Crying out for someone
To place me apart
From this world as He hears
And washes away my tears
With His water
That i know He値l deliver again and
Again



Cause I know in my dismal mind
I知 not forsaken
From His light



So here I am

Just a boy
With a pen
Sitting here
Righting away my sins
So hopefully
I can finally
Believe in dreams
Again
Written by TheRealSupes
Published
Author's Note
I wrote this in kind of a dark place, but I needed to get this out there. If you池e wondering why the i痴 are lowered until a certain point, there痴 actually a reason. I kinda always felt small so that illustrates it a bit.

The main focus was the flow. A lot of cliches and weak words, but it is what it is.

Constructive criticism is appreciated.
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