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Missing
Missing-
Slow, Country feel
Been searching for you---So long I've lost track
Been Searching my tears---Lord, take this load from my back
But you're missing---Still missing my tracks
And my mission---Is to find my way back (to you)
I remember your smile---Through the haze of life's past
I remember life's trials---Still you held me so fast
And I miss you---I never knew what I had
And I kiss you---In the dreams I still have
Chorus: I never knew what went wrong
But I carry your song---Right in my heart
Feels like millions of years---And billions of miles
Since I last felt your love---My prision's denial
And I'm missing---This life and your love
And my mission---Somehow rise above
Your memory has ways---Of piercing my thoughts
And I carry that weight---My burden and cross
And I'm missing---These things we once shared
And I'm kissing---A ghost in thin air
Chorus: I never knew what went wrong
I still carry your song---Right in my heart
-Instrumental-
Now, this here old song---It's breaking my heart
'Cause it's all that I have---Loving thru thoughts
And I'm missing---One chance in one life
And my mission---To make you my wife
So, I'll keep searching high---While feeling so low
Thru the fires of Hell---That tortures my soul
While I'm missing---This life and your love
And my mission---To smile thru lost love...
And my mission---To smile for my love...
And while missing---I'll cry your lost love.
Slow, Country feel
Been searching for you---So long I've lost track
Been Searching my tears---Lord, take this load from my back
But you're missing---Still missing my tracks
And my mission---Is to find my way back (to you)
I remember your smile---Through the haze of life's past
I remember life's trials---Still you held me so fast
And I miss you---I never knew what I had
And I kiss you---In the dreams I still have
Chorus: I never knew what went wrong
But I carry your song---Right in my heart
Feels like millions of years---And billions of miles
Since I last felt your love---My prision's denial
And I'm missing---This life and your love
And my mission---Somehow rise above
Your memory has ways---Of piercing my thoughts
And I carry that weight---My burden and cross
And I'm missing---These things we once shared
And I'm kissing---A ghost in thin air
Chorus: I never knew what went wrong
I still carry your song---Right in my heart
-Instrumental-
Now, this here old song---It's breaking my heart
'Cause it's all that I have---Loving thru thoughts
And I'm missing---One chance in one life
And my mission---To make you my wife
So, I'll keep searching high---While feeling so low
Thru the fires of Hell---That tortures my soul
While I'm missing---This life and your love
And my mission---To smile thru lost love...
And my mission---To smile for my love...
And while missing---I'll cry your lost love.
Published 7th Apr 2018
Author's Note
This song is about losing, 'The One.'
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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7th Apr 2018 2:15pm
"Your memory has ways---Of piercing my thoughts
And I carry that weight---My burden and cross
And I'm missing---These things we once shared
And I'm kissing---A ghost in thin air"
Thought I'd return the favor of you checkin' out my poetry , good sir...
Glad I did...
This stanza / phrase , gave me the feeling and vision , I believe you
wanted others to feel , and it touches the soul , with heartache
I myself have felt ;
Those lost loves , the one of a kind in each lifetime , act as catalysts
for our own change , and propel us forward into becoming the best
we can , and noticing the things and events we are presented with
through a different and wider lens...
May you fulfill that dream you speak of toward the end of your song...
Yet , always remember...sometimes those relationships *sometimes*
are the ones that prepare us , help us make those changes needed
inside us , that will then draw the next level of love into our life...
May whatever love you need to become the best man you will become
in this life , be drawn to you , by the changes you have now already made !
Best to you , as you walk your walk...;)
And I carry that weight---My burden and cross
And I'm missing---These things we once shared
And I'm kissing---A ghost in thin air"
Thought I'd return the favor of you checkin' out my poetry , good sir...
Glad I did...
This stanza / phrase , gave me the feeling and vision , I believe you
wanted others to feel , and it touches the soul , with heartache
I myself have felt ;
Those lost loves , the one of a kind in each lifetime , act as catalysts
for our own change , and propel us forward into becoming the best
we can , and noticing the things and events we are presented with
through a different and wider lens...
May you fulfill that dream you speak of toward the end of your song...
Yet , always remember...sometimes those relationships *sometimes*
are the ones that prepare us , help us make those changes needed
inside us , that will then draw the next level of love into our life...
May whatever love you need to become the best man you will become
in this life , be drawn to you , by the changes you have now already made !
Best to you , as you walk your walk...;)
I thank you, Blackwolf, for your beautiful response. I very much appreciate it but...I don't have that optimism, as you seem to possess, any longer. Too many trips down the road of broken dreams. Having said that, there is still one, small flicker of a candle alight and buried in me somewhere. I suppose that will have to do. It does kind of keep me hopeful. But, regardless, thank you for your kind words and the best to you, as well. Peace.
