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life is gnats all around one's head ..
and being unable to swim
he'd always appreciated bridges.
best to get over than too far in,
and never mind the midges ..
Published 6th Apr 2018
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6th Apr 2018 00:52am
g'odd blezz d'gnats of this precious world........sweet write, mate.
6th Apr 2018 11:03am
gnats, those little flying things
that hang around rivers and ponds
and get in your eyes and your
hair, I dunno why ..
that hang around rivers and ponds
and get in your eyes and your
hair, I dunno why ..
8th Apr 2018 00:06am
with all these freaking biting gnats, it really makes you wonder what is best: a momentary revolution or a permanent transition?...:)
Anonymous
13th Apr 2018 00:09am
innit though? life is many things, midges be one of them. ;)
13th Apr 2018 00:26am
just looked at your profile,
I love that you love Robert Herrick,
I thought I was the only one left ..
I love that you love Robert Herrick,
I thought I was the only one left ..
Anonymous
13th Apr 2018 00:30am
ahh , a toast to Electra! *clink*
no you're not. :)
no you're not. :)
