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Into The Wind
blood pools
and stars gaze
upon rivers turning red
a life otherwise dead
fulfilled with past regret
survival losing her fight
wasted with the night
last breaths blow
goodbyes into the wind
Published 4th Apr 2018
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4th Apr 2018 4:05am
"Blood pools" is a horrible image when it comes to life. If we need to fight, then I hope it wouldn't be as intense as that.
Nicely written!
very heartfelt with this!
much love
RoseJasmine
Nicely written!
very heartfelt with this!
much love
RoseJasmine
4th Apr 2018 6:07pm
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
4th Apr 2018 4:16am
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4th Apr 2018 6:08pm
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
4th Apr 2018 6:10pm
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4th Apr 2018 8:02am
I love the idea of "Survival" possibly being a battle commander (commandress?) losing her fight and falling under the hand of mortality.
Well written indeed!
Well written indeed!
4th Apr 2018 6:08pm
Anonymous
4th Apr 2018 4:37pm
There are so many ways I can interpret this one that it boggles my mind. A wholly beautiful and haunting piece, Tim
...Willow
...Willow
4th Apr 2018 6:09pm
