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Counting to Infinity (a Quintain)
Love's heart
Pressed so to ear
Two four six twenty-eight
Then the terminal beat and mine
No more.
R.
Pressed so to ear
Two four six twenty-eight
Then the terminal beat and mine
No more.
R.
Published 3rd Apr 2018
| Edited 19th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Submitted for Quintain competition.
Five lines, each 2-4-6-8-2 syllables, respectively. No rhyming.
Five lines, each 2-4-6-8-2 syllables, respectively. No rhyming.
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3rd Apr 2018 12:50pm
4th Apr 2018 1:16am
16th Apr 2018 10:04am
read it in the comp. n liked it that v.first time...the infinity, how mysterious in its depths..n no other better way to feel it than the elusivities in n around...love love that u say here in an endless end n a fused nothingness..
write on . respects
write on . respects
17th Apr 2018 5:11am
Thank you, Uma! Your comments of fused nothingness and endless ends is thé very essence. Touched by the comment and add.
