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Rewind
minds trip
skin touching skin
emotions erupt
no more no less
held tautly inside
comfort amid her sighs
lights flicker
time momentarily rewinds
skin touching skin
emotions erupt
no more no less
held tautly inside
comfort amid her sighs
lights flicker
time momentarily rewinds
Published 2nd Apr 2018
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2nd Apr 2018 7:19pm
Gentle flow with this one ... you say so much with so little ... I am always in awe of that. Bravo dear poet
3rd Apr 2018 4:01am
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2018 7:25pm
How you manage to convey so much in so few words is amazing to me. Sweet seduction in every line. Beautiful
...Willow
...Willow
3rd Apr 2018 4:02am
Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2018 5:48pm
2nd Apr 2018 9:24pm
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3rd Apr 2018 4:03am
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2018 00:47am
*serene*
this captures the senses
~Devlin
3rd Apr 2018 4:03am
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2018 4:36am
You are
welcome;)
