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The Dark Within

Written by Mayumi

Published 1st Apr 2018

#dark #evil #lies #TruthOfLife

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Re. The Dark Within

Anonymous

2nd Apr 2018 1:23am

Darkness that excludes any doubt. Rich with metaphors. You have depicted many traits of the human soul.

Re. The Dark Within

2nd Apr 2018 4:21am

Thanks so much. Glad it appealed to you. Happy Monday!

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Re. The Dark Within

15th Mar 2019 10:36pm

(un)Holy shit!!
this Dark spill slapped me!

Powerful and on point!
Super image'd spill

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15th Mar 2019 10:49pm

Why thank you! You are kind. Have a great weekend.

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15th Mar 2019 10:52pm

You as well

: )

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Anonymous

- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am

18th Mar 2019 10:15am

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18th Mar 2019 10:33am

Thanks so much. Xxx

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