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hiding spot (in pure wings)
With
pure wings
I unmask
my infinities
run away to the forest
to find my
simplicities
I want to find myself
happy
in true light
but I keep on holding
this inner fight
unsure of
who I am to
them
try to get to a place
no one
sees
no one gets
a seat
next to me
alone
is where
I find
acceptance
in this
dance
of
inner thoughts
and then
I unlock
all my abilities
I am my purest
set of wings
in a solitude
that
sings
sweet gestures
past dreams
blinking
inside
me
pure wings
I unmask
my infinities
run away to the forest
to find my
simplicities
I want to find myself
happy
in true light
but I keep on holding
this inner fight
unsure of
who I am to
them
try to get to a place
no one
sees
no one gets
a seat
next to me
alone
is where
I find
acceptance
in this
dance
of
inner thoughts
and then
I unlock
all my abilities
I am my purest
set of wings
in a solitude
that
sings
sweet gestures
past dreams
blinking
inside
me
Author's Note
write from today, living in my head, this is about me being able to get away and just be in my own thoughts
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Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
31st Mar 2018 6:09pm
"I am my purest set of wings" Beautiful. This one truly speaks to me, such grace. You seem to be an introvert. I'm an extrovert all the way, but we seem to share some commonalities.
Living in your head, though...the writer of course must, but on the other hand, the world is a big, gorgeous place. Spread those wings, girl!
Living in your head, though...the writer of course must, but on the other hand, the world is a big, gorgeous place. Spread those wings, girl!
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22nd Apr 2018 4:41pm
Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
31st Mar 2018 7:56pm
Loved the rhyming...and sentiment...all the psychic noise of others is distracting...sounds like motivation to go for a hike in the forest...by the way your avatar is upside down....Lawrence
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22nd Apr 2018 4:42pm
Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
4th Apr 2018 6:21pm
I can relate so easily with your quiet gentleness of solitude I found in reading this. Much Respect,
Shadow
Shadow
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22nd Apr 2018 4:42pm
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Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
"I unmask
my infinities
run away to the forest
to find my
simplicities"
This is so beautiful a thing to do. I love doing the same thing running to the wood as you.
"I am my purest set of wings"...I love your beautiful wings too. I have my wings, my imagination :)
much love
RoseJasmine
my infinities
run away to the forest
to find my
simplicities"
This is so beautiful a thing to do. I love doing the same thing running to the wood as you.
"I am my purest set of wings"...I love your beautiful wings too. I have my wings, my imagination :)
much love
RoseJasmine
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22nd Apr 2018 4:42pm
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Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
22nd Apr 2018 4:42pm
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Re. hiding spot (in pure wings)
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2018 5:21pm
Very well written. "I am my purest set of wings" is exceptional!
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