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sweeping
she is an earthling
in golden flower
trapped by the sun
and the little bees they come
shrouded in natural
colors
amongst a breeze
from the other
leaves
meant for keeping
in moments that had me
sweeping
in golden flower
trapped by the sun
and the little bees they come
shrouded in natural
colors
amongst a breeze
from the other
leaves
meant for keeping
in moments that had me
sweeping
Published 22nd Apr 2018
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22nd Apr 2018 5:12pm
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30th Apr 2018 7:38pm
I love your self-portrait. It's your nature that makes your poems unique and different from others. I can see the genuine and pure heart in this poem...this is short, but I enjoy a lot...like what Lawrence said, I love the bees, breeze, flower, leaves....
much much love
Jasmine
much much love
Jasmine
27th May 2018 10:26pm
thank you so much what you said means more to me than you know. much much love and peace
