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Excitement
It drives him wild to see my excitement running down my thighs. My scent makes him so hungry he needs a taste. I'm sweet on his lips and thick like honey on his tongue. His mouth is deliciously greedy. His ravenous tongue searchs as deep as this ocean allows. He finds more desire and coaxes it from my body again and again. He's feral in this state. He's thirsty for my orgasms.
He was hard long before his lips staked claim between my legs. My pleasure is his in every sense but it's his turn. All he wants is to bury himself deep in his little piece of heaven. He's needy for my sweet spot to welcome every drop of his own release. He looks up to see my gazing blue eyes as his glistening lips make their way upward. This may have driven him wild, the sight of my excitement running down my thighs. His excitement cascading down them sends him into delirium though.
He was hard long before his lips staked claim between my legs. My pleasure is his in every sense but it's his turn. All he wants is to bury himself deep in his little piece of heaven. He's needy for my sweet spot to welcome every drop of his own release. He looks up to see my gazing blue eyes as his glistening lips make their way upward. This may have driven him wild, the sight of my excitement running down my thighs. His excitement cascading down them sends him into delirium though.
Published 31st Mar 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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31st Mar 2018 8:09am
A woman's excitement unleashes man's response.
If oral sex was described in the Song of Songs, it might probably be like this.
If oral sex was described in the Song of Songs, it might probably be like this.
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- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
10th Apr 2018 8:22pm
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10th Apr 2018 10:38pm
So very glad I am painting the picture intended!! Thanks for all the positive feedback!!
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22nd Feb 2019 3:09pm
Glad to see you always had a way with words. Little piece of heaven is right.
24th Feb 2019 5:31pm
Thank you so much for the comment & add. I miss these days too, things were so simple for me then. I'm glad you liked it!!!
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17th Mar 2019 10:14pm
Haha..you have me giggling! This is where it all started my 2nd go around, but first on here. All others got deleted 4 or so years ago. Actually I remember Feed My Soul as first but it got added here out of order. Thank you sweet friend..so appreciated!!!!
10th Apr 2019 7:35am
''He's thirsty for my orgasms. ''....sexy imagery indeed...
i feelin the tone of this vibe...
i feelin the tone of this vibe...
This tale is her answer to my request, “speak to me of heaven.” And the woman blossomed. A dream come true for poets such as myself. XoXo John
12th Sep 2019 11:48pm
13th May 2020 8:37pm
"It drives him wild to see my excitement running down my thighs" Wow!! One of the best opening lines to a poem I've ever had the pleasure to be stunned by!!
Damn! You got me going girl! ;P
I recently published a poem on here called Her Breathless Lips, about the fulfilling devotion of giving a girl that special kiss from the male perspective. Your poem compliments mine describing the same act from the woman's point of view.
This piece is just perfect in every way. Applause!!!
I'm gonna go eat my wife now, I mean, kiss her good night.
XXX
Damn! You got me going girl! ;P
I recently published a poem on here called Her Breathless Lips, about the fulfilling devotion of giving a girl that special kiss from the male perspective. Your poem compliments mine describing the same act from the woman's point of view.
This piece is just perfect in every way. Applause!!!
I'm gonna go eat my wife now, I mean, kiss her good night.
XXX
26th Feb 2024 00:29am
Love the energy and anticipation in this. Nothing like a partners completely enamored with each other driving each other mad with desire.
Great work.
Great work.
