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blow me away oh wind
blow me away oh wind
like dust of desert sands
over parched rivers and
the famine stricken lands
blow me away oh wind
with the darkest grey clouds
let thunder and its spark
make me a carbon shroud
blow me away oh wind
across these jagged cliffs
let razor sharp ledges
accentuate my drift
blow me away oh wind
blow me out to the sea
way o'er the horizon
leavin' it behind me
blow me away oh wind
to a place that's my home
for i can move no more
exhausted from the roams
blow me away oh wind
take me down to her gate
lest i'm stuck forever
and death becomes my fate
take me there oh wind for
at least a single glance
grateful will be my soul
you giving me that chance
blow me away oh wind
take me down to her place
peace then will be my heart
seeing her face to face
blow me away oh wind...
like dust of desert sands
over parched rivers and
the famine stricken lands
blow me away oh wind
with the darkest grey clouds
let thunder and its spark
make me a carbon shroud
blow me away oh wind
across these jagged cliffs
let razor sharp ledges
accentuate my drift
blow me away oh wind
blow me out to the sea
way o'er the horizon
leavin' it behind me
blow me away oh wind
to a place that's my home
for i can move no more
exhausted from the roams
blow me away oh wind
take me down to her gate
lest i'm stuck forever
and death becomes my fate
take me there oh wind for
at least a single glance
grateful will be my soul
you giving me that chance
blow me away oh wind
take me down to her place
peace then will be my heart
seeing her face to face
blow me away oh wind...
Published 23rd Mar 2018
| Edited 24th Mar 2018
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23rd Mar 2018 7:18pm
I adore everything about this piece, cold. It's so beautiful and well expressed. I can't point to a line or stanza, this is a masterpiece from start to finish. The imagery throughout is so captivating and it leaves me with a great peaceful feeling.
Another for the RL.
~anonshadow
Another for the RL.
~anonshadow
24th Mar 2018 6:05am
welcome
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the review affectionate!
what greater joy for a scribbler than to learn a peer enjoying the work. utterly humbled by the appreciation dear Friend!!
gratitude
immense!
for the visit
the honor!
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the review affectionate!
what greater joy for a scribbler than to learn a peer enjoying the work. utterly humbled by the appreciation dear Friend!!
gratitude
immense!
for the visit
the honor!
I absolutely love this, not only such amazing imagery but a feeling of being caught up in the winds urgent, desperate journey to reach home before the strength & power leaves it's sails. An amazing write of Mother Nature's raw beauty. Excellent work C_F. Much Respect,
me
me
24th Mar 2018 11:54am
what a joy! again!
a friend's pleasure reading a simple scribble.
welcome
is the Friend!
welcome
is the review generous!
well....when one can only hope and wish...inks like these flow.
appreciation.
immense!
a friend's pleasure reading a simple scribble.
welcome
is the Friend!
welcome
is the review generous!
well....when one can only hope and wish...inks like these flow.
appreciation.
immense!
24th Mar 2018 1:56pm
24th Mar 2018 2:05pm
Welcome!
is the poet admired!!
welcome
is the review kind!
pleasure and honor the visit, the review!!
humbled!
appreciation
immense!
is the poet admired!!
welcome
is the review kind!
pleasure and honor the visit, the review!!
humbled!
appreciation
immense!
24th Mar 2018 4:04pm
Channeling King Solomon? Or perhaps creating psalms for the 21st century?
Love the way I feel blown away to different places and feelings as I read
Love the way I feel blown away to different places and feelings as I read
25th Mar 2018 8:16am
welcome
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the review Friendly!
just if i can only dream of doing either my friend, it'd already mean i'd have achieved something. You left a bearded guy blushing there!!
honor,joy and pleasure is all mine to have your company here dear Friend.
appreciation.
immense.
is the Poet admired!
welcome
is the review Friendly!
just if i can only dream of doing either my friend, it'd already mean i'd have achieved something. You left a bearded guy blushing there!!
honor,joy and pleasure is all mine to have your company here dear Friend.
appreciation.
immense.
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27th Mar 2018 12:25pm
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29th Mar 2018 8:41pm
Welcome
is the Friend Admired!
Welcome
is the Artist!
honor is all mine to have the visit, the review.
Can't wait to read and listen to your gem, from the glimpse you gave us, leaves us excited.
humbled.
appreciation.
deep.
is the Friend Admired!
Welcome
is the Artist!
honor is all mine to have the visit, the review.
Can't wait to read and listen to your gem, from the glimpse you gave us, leaves us excited.
humbled.
appreciation.
deep.
27th Mar 2018 3:05pm
Since cremation is my chosen
end, this speaks to me in that sense.
Let the wind spread what's
left of me, that part which has
no value except for what it can
contribute to nature that I failed
to do in the here and now.
Yet, you have penned an even
deeper meaning into this piece and
it conjures thoughts in other directions
as well. That last trip, settling the heart
before the next great journey, if one exists.
Well done as always, tickling the mind
and provoking thought while at the same
time, soothing the heart and putting the soul at rest.
end, this speaks to me in that sense.
Let the wind spread what's
left of me, that part which has
no value except for what it can
contribute to nature that I failed
to do in the here and now.
Yet, you have penned an even
deeper meaning into this piece and
it conjures thoughts in other directions
as well. That last trip, settling the heart
before the next great journey, if one exists.
Well done as always, tickling the mind
and provoking thought while at the same
time, soothing the heart and putting the soul at rest.
29th Mar 2018 8:56pm
Welcome
is the Friend Admired.
Welcome
is the review insightful and enlightening.
the review,
your words, dear friend
leave such an impact
you show profundity
shared by but a few peers.
the elements they're magical.
the depth is in the eyes of the beholder i say.
pleasure, honor is all the scribblers.
humbled.
appreciation
beyond words!
is the Friend Admired.
Welcome
is the review insightful and enlightening.
the review,
your words, dear friend
leave such an impact
you show profundity
shared by but a few peers.
the elements they're magical.
the depth is in the eyes of the beholder i say.
pleasure, honor is all the scribblers.
humbled.
appreciation
beyond words!
