My love mailed

Nice.  Straight forward.  To the point.  No hidden meanings.  No flowery words to confuse the reader.  Simple language.  And it goes somewhere.  So this poet hits all the points a poet should hit.  Except for one.  It seems to be a love poem.  And I don't feel anything.  It is too intellectual.  It leads up to the point of almost going to make me feel something but it ends.    There is an author's note that explains this piece and that note makes me feel more that this poem does.  It is as if the poet took one understanding and wrote a long intellectual poem about it instead of just saying what he wanted to say with feeling.  "when i saw a good morning message from the girl i love , i felt happy she thought about me ."   'Nuff said.