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Gone
I've stayed to long
i hurt the ones i love
and caused a little bit of wrong
even though my life is shitty
like some country song
you all will no more have to deal with me for to long.
I wanted to say sory to the ones i hurt
he ones who cared
for it was alos my burdens
that they too beared
but it's I to blame
for i'm the one that shared
my feelings and pain
and was only met with anger and shame
This is farewell
if you truly need me
you can find me in hell
or whatever it is YOU call life
can you hear the ringing bell?
It's calling me home
for i'm not just Benji or Ben
I'm lucifer, the angel that fell
i hurt the ones i love
and caused a little bit of wrong
even though my life is shitty
like some country song
you all will no more have to deal with me for to long.
I wanted to say sory to the ones i hurt
he ones who cared
for it was alos my burdens
that they too beared
but it's I to blame
for i'm the one that shared
my feelings and pain
and was only met with anger and shame
This is farewell
if you truly need me
you can find me in hell
or whatever it is YOU call life
can you hear the ringing bell?
It's calling me home
for i'm not just Benji or Ben
I'm lucifer, the angel that fell
Published 8th Oct 2011
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8th Oct 2011 3:19pm
i'm sorry all....this might be farewell for....well ever. I really don't know what to do or where to turn anymore. Gothy if you comment angrily on this fine, i know i hurt you but you don't know how truly sorry i am. And neither do you Nyx or Belle. You all think i just do it all for attention, well i wasn't. The eason i wwrite poetry is so that people know what real pain is and how it affects people. If you think your life is bad, remeber it could always be worse. Your best friend could get hit by a bus or everyone you care about could leave you and commit suicide. Other than that, thanks for keeping me alive for so long guys.
Anonymous
8th Oct 2011 4:08pm
..... You promised :'(
8th Oct 2011 4:25pm
im just thinking about leaving okay? To much shiz is goin on and the bullying is so much worse. Its turned fri m names to threats and now assault. Just because im "emo" and act differently.
Anonymous
8th Oct 2011 5:10pm
want me to come up there and kill someone? come to murray. shit aint like that here. :(
8th Oct 2011 5:13pm
haha no thanks,cant have my college babysitter in jail can i? and i am,just two more years :/ ur gonna be my roomate :D ;)
Anonymous
8th Oct 2011 5:15pm
who said i'd get caught >:) and i cant be your room mate unless you get a sex change hun :/ but if you apply for regents and get in we'd be in the same dorm :D
8th Oct 2011 5:41pm
8th Oct 2011 5:52pm
you just don't understand ...i can't count how many times iv'e heard this if you were truly sorry you would message me and wouldn't go on about raping animals as you know i am an animal lover and don't bring up my friends death
8th Oct 2011 6:48pm
8th Oct 2011 6:49pm
8th Oct 2011 10:36pm
A very poetic, stunning farewell letter. I feel the same about leaving this ignorant world.
9th Oct 2011 00:04am
I never know when You will leave it puts me on edge....I worry and i think and i cry over the thought of you dying but ive said it befor dad ill still be here if you leve me behind in the end you would prove me right and i would lose one more reson to fight
dude don't let people get you down. this is only going to happen a small percentage of YOUR life.
your just showing those kids they were right.
you are just that emo kid. who gave up and killed them self. You can make a difference in your life. you can stand up for yourself. as I said this will only happen for few more years. then your free. and their is always someone out their that cares about you. your life has value and meaning.
your just showing those kids they were right.
you are just that emo kid. who gave up and killed them self. You can make a difference in your life. you can stand up for yourself. as I said this will only happen for few more years. then your free. and their is always someone out their that cares about you. your life has value and meaning.
