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Snow Angel
If I fell for you
Would I melt the moment
I touched your skin
Would you ball me up,
play for hours
Til your fingers were numb
and felt joy within'.
Would I melt the moment
I touched your skin
Would you ball me up,
play for hours
Til your fingers were numb
and felt joy within'.
Published 22nd Mar 2018
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22nd Mar 2018 1:47am
22nd Mar 2018 2:32pm
Cruz, This is a super romantic piece. I love the idea of melting into one another and spending the day playing. I also really enjoy short poems that say volumes. Brava!
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
28th Mar 2018 11:59pm
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29th Mar 2018 1:07am
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
29th Mar 2018 8:08pm
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29th Mar 2018 10:49pm
29th Mar 2018 9:20am
my darling to be a poet people think it has to be long, you captured so much
