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Leaden
Lift my massive mind
babe,
try...
Snap your slender spinal
column
Samson style
Big boy
big boy
Don't presume to cry
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Re. Leaden
15th Mar 2018 5:18pm
Any time someone posts song lyrics on here i want to hear them sing or even hum the tune to hone in on the beat and style of the song.
i've been tempted to set up a youtube account myself just for poetry to do spoken word stuff but i hold back for now.
cool lyrics, i dig.
now you have to start an killer indie girl punk band to appease us as the masses demand lol.
i've been tempted to set up a youtube account myself just for poetry to do spoken word stuff but i hold back for now.
cool lyrics, i dig.
now you have to start an killer indie girl punk band to appease us as the masses demand lol.
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Re: Re. Leaden
15th Mar 2018 5:26pm
I have the same response, just posting text doesn't give much context. I'm a shit singer though...😆
Thank you dude :)
Thank you dude :)
Re: Re. Leaden
15th Mar 2018 5:31pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0d5eP0wWLQY
anyone can make it in America as a singer lol.
anyone can make it in America as a singer lol.
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Re. Leaden
Anonymous
15th Mar 2018 9:26pm
Ooo I wish I could hear him this one girl...Lol sounds like a kick ass song...us know I do play guitar pretty dam good....I'll help u find some chords for it....
Love Autumn xoxo
Love Autumn xoxo
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Re: Re. Leaden
16th Mar 2018 4:52am
Re. Leaden
16th Mar 2018 1:16am
Re. Leaden
16th Mar 2018 3:42am
oh my goodness love the strength in this write
you gave me big smiles with this one :)
love Brenda
you gave me big smiles with this one :)
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Leaden
16th Mar 2018 4:51am
Re. Leaden
25th Mar 2018 7:57pm
I don't know if my interpretation is right but this felt like a punch to the guts - I feel its power :-)))))
would love to see more :-))))))))))))))))))))
would love to see more :-))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Leaden
27th Mar 2018 5:36am
Thank you so much David! I've been writing less and less, and I want to get burrow back into the pages again, I appreciate it :)