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Stupor in a Prayer
Curtains drawn over eyes
Ears closed wide,
You're not listening to me...
Not being cross or sore not trying to boss or bore..
Care for you,is beyond reproach
No doubt
You should know yet
I'm afraid how far it's allowed to go...
Will it cloak you...in the Underworld with Hades?
Ignore it like gum on your shoes
from walking down the street
Will you think of it a burden...
Dragging 'round a Valentine Achilles?...
Bastard thought cast in an Orphanage of Dreams.
Ears closed wide,
You're not listening to me...
Not being cross or sore not trying to boss or bore..
Care for you,is beyond reproach
No doubt
You should know yet
I'm afraid how far it's allowed to go...
Will it cloak you...in the Underworld with Hades?
Ignore it like gum on your shoes
from walking down the street
Will you think of it a burden...
Dragging 'round a Valentine Achilles?...
Bastard thought cast in an Orphanage of Dreams.
Written by
SeaEntity1
Published 11th Mar 2018
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Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 8:04am
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11th Mar 2018 8:12am
Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 12:15pm
Yup, vocally evocative, n power-full spill of emotional content... Outstanding!
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Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 10:23pm
Wow SE.......this has me thinking........I’m lost for words but dry glad I read this brilliant ink........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 10:39pm
A deep one you are..
'Dragging 'round a Valentine Achilles?...
Bastard thought cast in an Orphanage of Dreams.'
so much to unpack there...
you spark a litany of thoughts
'Dragging 'round a Valentine Achilles?...
Bastard thought cast in an Orphanage of Dreams.'
so much to unpack there...
you spark a litany of thoughts
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Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 10:42pm
Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 11:26pm
Re: Re. Stupor in a Prayer
11th Mar 2018 11:31pm
Thanks! The melody that inspired it was haunting me...
had to leak some ink!
had to leak some ink!
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11th Mar 2018 11:33pm