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Lay Bare
Blissful moon shines her light
warm winds flap in the night
white and red I rest my head
each night she holds me tight
with her words and her mind
and I find myself aflutter
every feeling uttered
with intensity, and electricity
igniting my heart
knowing we'll never be apart
for when afar
we are each other's star
Hold me tonight in your thought
an abridged adaption of attention
to detail run abreast
where steam does rise
and juices flow in creative captivity
begging for undue mercy
Climb to the penthouse of dreams
where vines grip yesterday's green
soothing sips taken of serenity
satisfying olfactory senses
undressing all our defenses
and falling into the fire of desire
Lay bare upon these shoulders
endulge in my homemade wine
tease and plead and plunder
the straps and tongues held
in euphoric moments of time
warm winds flap in the night
white and red I rest my head
each night she holds me tight
with her words and her mind
and I find myself aflutter
every feeling uttered
with intensity, and electricity
igniting my heart
knowing we'll never be apart
for when afar
we are each other's star
Hold me tonight in your thought
an abridged adaption of attention
to detail run abreast
where steam does rise
and juices flow in creative captivity
begging for undue mercy
Climb to the penthouse of dreams
where vines grip yesterday's green
soothing sips taken of serenity
satisfying olfactory senses
undressing all our defenses
and falling into the fire of desire
Lay bare upon these shoulders
endulge in my homemade wine
tease and plead and plunder
the straps and tongues held
in euphoric moments of time
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Re. Lay Bare
Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 4:02pm
I think I've read this four times now and it just gets more beautiful with each reading. Soft and alluring. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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9th Mar 2018 4:06pm
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 4:41pm
This is full of dreamy thoughts.
I absolutely love these lines
“Climb to the penthouse of dreams
where vines grip yesterday's green”
I absolutely love these lines
“Climb to the penthouse of dreams
where vines grip yesterday's green”
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9th Mar 2018 4:50pm
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 5:01pm
Soft spoken,
quite heavenly in words
but it was
the overall tranquility
that left me speechless.
*beautiful* ... loved it, Tim
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9th Mar 2018 5:05pm
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Re. Lay Bare
9th Mar 2018 9:18pm
"Climb to the penthouse of dreams/where vines grip yesterday's green" ... "Lay bare upon these shoulders/endulge in my homemade wine" ... just beautiful. Such sweet poetic seduction ...
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Re. Lay Bare
10th Mar 2018 2:53am
Very pretty, I like the wordplay of the title and how it unfolded in the poem..
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Re. Lay Bare
10th Mar 2018 8:03am
You have a beautiful flow to your work. I felt all dreamy as I journeyed along your delicate words. A delightful poem
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