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All Eyes On Me
the glassy eyed truth
is on a child's spindle of belief
the cosmos awakens to find her clothes missing
her children raped
if this disturbs you it should
the galactic ball is attended by a thief
who stole everything precious
with lies told from the pul-pit
scavenger of those who fear
I am their Mother
you can no longer keep me restrained
I slept a millennia evolving
and gaining momentum while asleep
no need for speculation
you've a plan I am going to derail it
this is plain talk
even an illiterate beast can understand
I left my message at the door
I'll be storming it soon we're at war
your intentions are weak
i'm not number 203
your mistress, whore or door
stand clear
this is the last warning you'll ever hear
i'm lethal
yes death awaits you
Captain Sir
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Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 6:33pm
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9th Mar 2018 5:27pm
thank you dearest Tim she's not scorned though just on fire.. I appreciate you coming through..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 6:59pm
apocryphal vision, Brenda....Kali at work....still regeneration requires some destruction..as always a compelling read...
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9th Mar 2018 5:27pm
thank you graciously dearest Lawrence for feeling the vibe of this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. All Eyes On Me
Anonymous
8th Mar 2018 7:25pm
This one brings to mind the phrase "destruction is but another form of creation." You've penned some potent imagery here with your words, my lovely Dark Angel. Raging protective mother eyes and vengeance filled words. I love you :-)
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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9th Mar 2018 5:28pm
thank you beautiful Willow I love your vision of this write..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 7:40pm
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9th Mar 2018 5:28pm
thank you my Darkest Lord you honor me greatly and brought me many smiles :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 7:50pm
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9th Mar 2018 5:53pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly yes hell has never seen the likes of women like us ;)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 7:55pm
I stand with you on this, beautiful Crim, profound sentiment proffered without leaving any doubt in a kick ass manner that resonates while stewing in its own rage. I'd say more but you already said it.
Much love to you....David
Much love to you....David
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9th Mar 2018 5:54pm
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 9:07pm
You can feel the emotions and the power behind your words....... This reads try me if you want.... No joke....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
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9th Mar 2018 5:54pm
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 9:35pm
Spectacular work Crim. Captain Sir is in serious trouble. You may be harsh at times, but your talent is lovely and dangerous as they come.
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9th Mar 2018 5:55pm
Re. All Eyes On Me
8th Mar 2018 11:51pm
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9th Mar 2018 5:56pm
thank you graciously beautiful Atomik One for the love you're deeply appreciated..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 3:31am
Brenda.. brilliantly powerful.. much love my sister..
Dave
Dave
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9th Mar 2018 5:56pm
Re. All Eyes On Me
Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 4:38am
Awesome piece of work!! Great job!!
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9th Mar 2018 5:57pm
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9th Mar 2018 4:42am
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9th Mar 2018 5:57pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jade for the love you've shown on this write..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. All Eyes On Me
11th Mar 2018 1:43am
this is not crazy - it's necessary - when dancing with the devil you have to stomp on his foot now and then :-)))))
go girl :-))) Huge massive hugs :-)))))
go girl :-))) Huge massive hugs :-)))))
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Re: Re. All Eyes On Me
28th Jan 2019 6:25pm
she's done with his games...when you read the next one realize her children are naughty they play games with her while in mortal form thinking she doesn't have things on lock...as for you... you already know how I feel 💕
thank you for reading today...
love Brenda ❤
thank you for reading today...
love Brenda ❤