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Invisible and Forgotten
I dont get people
I just really....dont
They can make you feel so good
One moment
Then make you feel totally invisible
In the next
Like, help me ease my mind
I wanna know that what i am feeling is
Wrong....
But i start feeling more and more forgotten....
I just really....dont
They can make you feel so good
One moment
Then make you feel totally invisible
In the next
Like, help me ease my mind
I wanna know that what i am feeling is
Wrong....
But i start feeling more and more forgotten....
Published 2nd Mar 2018
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2nd Mar 2018 5:14am
Invisibility is a superpower....to be forgotten is what one has to sue facebook for...you are neither else how could I write this comment...but treasure those moments of anonymity and keep writing....enjoyed your poem....Lawrence
2nd Mar 2018 9:51am
2nd Mar 2018 9:04am
Yes, indeed, people are like that. Sometimes they are cooperative and hehpful, but some other time they ignore you altogether as if you don't exist. I think that depends on their state of mind.
2nd Mar 2018 9:52am
3rd Mar 2018 4:24am
I recently went through a thing where my most beloved friend had distanced from me. I had the reasons all wrong. It led to such a terrible misunderstanding. We just never know what is going on in another person's life, but I know how much it hurts when someone is just gone.
3rd Mar 2018 8:23am
10th Mar 2018 11:18pm
Life is strange, sometimes I pray for invisibility - its a double edged sword and i can feel the loneliness of this write - humans are fickle that will always be the way it is unless you are lucky enough to meet your soulmate - good luck with that, never lose hope :-))))))
excellent writing :-)))))))))))))))))
excellent writing :-)))))))))))))))))
11th Mar 2018 6:34am
