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Gray Skies
Gray Skies?
That's when you exploded like
Fireworks in my night
And ashes left it gray for a lifetime.
That's when you exploded like
Fireworks in my night
And ashes left it gray for a lifetime.
Published 26th Feb 2018
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26th Feb 2018 1:54am
This rhymes so well. I love the flow, the words and poignancy. Bravo!
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
26th Feb 2018 3:00am
26th Feb 2018 7:22pm
Short. But it packs a heck of a punch. That last line nearly knocked me out of my chair. Excellent work.
4th Mar 2018 5:01pm
watching fireworks makes me happy and when the show is about to end, i feel lonely. 😭
