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Published 25th Feb 2018
| Edited 21st Mar 2018
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6-word visual poetry entry, words & image by Jade Pandora, for the DUP competition "Paint me a poem in 6 words".
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25th Feb 2018 12:43pm
25th Feb 2018 12:51pm
25th Feb 2018 1:18pm
Love your mouse work! Great entry.. did it just get hot in here?
(It's hard to type in the car...)
(It's hard to type in the car...)
25th Feb 2018 2:17pm
exquisite
I must say
only six words one per inch
may I express my views if you don't mind
''lips kiss intake every inch within''
I must say
only six words one per inch
may I express my views if you don't mind
''lips kiss intake every inch within''
26th Feb 2018 3:20am
Ah ha! You really are a “romantic” at heart... I’ve suspected this all along.😇
RL gratitude.
RL gratitude.
26th Feb 2018 5:18am
Romance and romanticism are my forte
since birth
now even
as I near my final
end
amen
deserving poetry must be rldded
since birth
now even
as I near my final
end
amen
deserving poetry must be rldded
26th Feb 2018 10:17am
25th Feb 2018 3:42pm
Oh thank you for this, dear Rachel...
And welcome to DUP, and for the Follow.💐
And welcome to DUP, and for the Follow.💐
25th Feb 2018 9:31pm
I always appreciate unapologetic philosophy...bravo!...but I am in love with the visual!...very much ...wonderful job
Jeff
Jeff
Why thank you very much, Jeff. The image is my own artwork which I call “mouseworks” that I taught myself how to do back around 2003.🙂
26th Feb 2018 11:58pm
27th Feb 2018 00:12am
