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S•Y•M•P•H•O•N•Y🎻
( a Sonnet )
The melody from snow that falls,
Its swirling melee are the reeds,
With chorus from a crow that calls
Its sound a single brass horn bleeds.
The wind that bends the upper pine
Creates a ghostly lyric’s rush,
For months to pass & Spring to find,
Between the gray sky’s drift & hush.
With Winter’s life & death well met,
Then chime of crystalline snowflake,
The gentle soul of string quartet
That dances ‘cross a frozen lake,
‘Till crash of cymbals swell, ascend
To storm of kettle’s booming end.
Copyright©️Jade Pandora 2018. All Rights Reserved.
The melody from snow that falls,
Its swirling melee are the reeds,
With chorus from a crow that calls
Its sound a single brass horn bleeds.
The wind that bends the upper pine
Creates a ghostly lyric’s rush,
For months to pass & Spring to find,
Between the gray sky’s drift & hush.
With Winter’s life & death well met,
Then chime of crystalline snowflake,
The gentle soul of string quartet
That dances ‘cross a frozen lake,
‘Till crash of cymbals swell, ascend
To storm of kettle’s booming end.
Copyright©️Jade Pandora 2018. All Rights Reserved.
Published 23rd Feb 2018
| Edited 21st Mar 2018
Author's Note
kettle = kettle drum
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Feb 2018 12:17pm
Just beautiful,
The Symphony Jade!!
Flow, flawless.
Delivery, just spell casting.
The Symphony Jade!!
Flow, flawless.
Delivery, just spell casting.
23rd Feb 2018 12:55pm
23rd Feb 2018 5:10pm
beautiful sonnet
i love em
but rarely compose
as syllables count
are outta ma reach
lots of em had tried to teach
i love em
but rarely compose
as syllables count
are outta ma reach
lots of em had tried to teach
Thank you, Again, for your thoughts and the recommend. I’m glad you like the piece.🐯 Concerning writing using a syllable count, it actually can be fun - it is for me - but practice is what will help it become more second nature for a poet. I’ve been a poet since I was a child and I still practice.
You should if you hope to be good.
Hey, I’m a poet & don’t even know it!😆
You should if you hope to be good.
Hey, I’m a poet & don’t even know it!😆
24th Feb 2018 4:35pm
24th Feb 2018 4:46pm
23rd Feb 2018 8:54pm
24th Feb 2018 1:58pm
Why thank you, dear, how kind of you. I’m glad you were able to embrace my effort.
And let me welcome you to DUP.
~Jade🐯💐
And let me welcome you to DUP.
~Jade🐯💐
24th Feb 2018 00:45am
I think you know how I feel about it already... But just to be sure...
I love it!
It will be one of my favorites of yours for so many different reasons.
tommy
I love it!
It will be one of my favorites of yours for so many different reasons.
tommy
24th Feb 2018 5:26pm
I love a good sonnet and you didn't disappoint. I loved all your imagery dear.🙂
24th Feb 2018 5:39pm
Why thank you so much, dear Tim. I’ve done the Sonnet form but not lately, so I very much enjoyed writing this.
24th Feb 2018 8:45pm
Beautifully worded and rhymed, Jade. I wish I could write with such elegance...
Aah, thank you so much, my dear crowfly friend. But you have your own special poet’s voice; unique in its expression. And just as you admire & wish you could write at times in the style of another poet, don’t think for a moment there aren’t others who admire & wish they could write in ways they’ve read from you.
You’re in my thoughts, 👩🏻🎨Thomas.
You’re in my thoughts, 👩🏻🎨Thomas.
3rd Mar 2018 9:14pm
This is a beautiful relating of nature with music, it conveys that same dramatic quality, like a live symphony would with its many sounds..
4th Mar 2018 8:34am
Exactly so, my kindred poetess. And thank you, I’m honored that your presence & words have graced my work.
4th Mar 2018 8:18pm
Very atmospheric poem, nice.
It took me away into a tranquil wonderland.
It took me away into a tranquil wonderland.
4th Mar 2018 8:30pm
Why thank you, how very kind of you to come by for a read and share that with me.
7th Mar 2018 2:19am
Thank you so very much for coming over for a read. Your words & RL: most generous.
9th Mar 2018 5:33am
Truly a symphony of words. I loved how when I read it out loud I could hear the different parts of the orchestra, honing in on the horns, cymbals, and maybe a violin hiding in there. I can almost see/hear a lone ice skater on an isolated pond spinning to the beauty you had made. thank you for your inspiration of imagination.
9th Mar 2018 6:10am
Why thank you most kindly Loral for sharing how my piece came to life through your senses. And yes, I’m sure you did indeed hear the strings! Other sections within the piece are reeds (clarinet, oboe, flute), brass (horns), percussion (chimes, triangle, cymbals, kettle drum). It means a lot how my words gave you beauty & music.🎶
