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this is the sweetest suicide
life goes on
just another day
this is the sweetest suicide
blood pours out
of my open wounds
this is the sweetest suicide
the haunting smiles
and heartless laughter
this is the sweetest suicide
the pills are counted
the knife is sharp
this is the sweetest suicide
the letter placed
my final breath
this is the sweetest suicide
and now at last
i say goodbye
this is the sweetest suicide
just another day
this is the sweetest suicide
blood pours out
of my open wounds
this is the sweetest suicide
the haunting smiles
and heartless laughter
this is the sweetest suicide
the pills are counted
the knife is sharp
this is the sweetest suicide
the letter placed
my final breath
this is the sweetest suicide
and now at last
i say goodbye
this is the sweetest suicide
Published 4th Oct 2011
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4th Oct 2011 11:32am
Anonymous
4th Oct 2011 3:38pm
you know, I always get weary commenting on this type of poetry. I get nervous of saying things like "brilliant" because if the author at the time is in a bad place, then they could constue my comment to mean, that's a good idea.
And Tashi, I love your poetry, so its NOT a good idea, but I just had to let you know, that this is a damn brilliant piece of poetry right here.
Well done!
Blue Skies -x-
And Tashi, I love your poetry, so its NOT a good idea, but I just had to let you know, that this is a damn brilliant piece of poetry right here.
Well done!
Blue Skies -x-
4th Oct 2011 7:41pm
You captured a mood and held it hostage.I know that feeling very well, this is about pin point perfect. Just not a good idea to ever do, that place is lonely and dark. stay positive XD
5th Oct 2011 8:54am
Anonymous
5th Oct 2011 11:51am
Maybe wees the ones who have been here, b4
we getit
:)
I wanted to ask, its not your normal style to write a whole piece in lowercase, so I assumed you did it purposefully, anyway I was just wondering what the significance was?
we getit
:)
I wanted to ask, its not your normal style to write a whole piece in lowercase, so I assumed you did it purposefully, anyway I was just wondering what the significance was?
17th May 2013 7:05pm
31st May 2013 7:26am
It seems to be just as said, a truly sweet suicide. I can relate by thought & I think this is well written. Good job!
