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Feels like...
I love how this feels...
it's almost like
being completely frozen in forever.
our breathing even
I wonder what would happen if
we shared our forevers
and you ran away with me tonight.
it's almost like
being completely frozen in forever.
our breathing even
I wonder what would happen if
we shared our forevers
and you ran away with me tonight.
Published 22nd Feb 2018
Author's Note
I have developed a slight obsession with this type of poem. So, read the last word of every line one more time :)
This is a poem I wrote for someone important to me; the sentence it spells out is a line from a song. Mine by Bazzi. I chose this line because he loves that song and this is, after all, for him.
This is a poem I wrote for someone important to me; the sentence it spells out is a line from a song. Mine by Bazzi. I chose this line because he loves that song and this is, after all, for him.
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22nd Feb 2018 4:01pm
Lots of forevers last for one night... sometimes it's better that way!
Interesting style that will get more difficult the longer the poem lasts.
Probably not forever...
J
Interesting style that will get more difficult the longer the poem lasts.
Probably not forever...
J
22nd Feb 2018 5:27pm
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