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All I ever wanted
My love,
I hate you, at least I did before
I dont feel it so much anymore
I felt it burning inside my chest
As you walked out the door with her
but I dont hate you anymore
I ran into her yesterday
the girl that you picked when you walked away
dont worry I left her at your front door
neatly wrapped and tightly packed
with garbage bags galore
p.s this settles the score
I hate you, at least I did before
I dont feel it so much anymore
I felt it burning inside my chest
As you walked out the door with her
but I dont hate you anymore
I ran into her yesterday
the girl that you picked when you walked away
dont worry I left her at your front door
neatly wrapped and tightly packed
with garbage bags galore
p.s this settles the score
Published 4th Oct 2011
| Edited 5th Jan 2012
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4th Oct 2011 3:43am
4th Oct 2011 3:30pm
thank you very much I'm glad it amused it did when I was writing it to :D
4th Oct 2011 4:18pm
4th Oct 2011 4:33pm
it makes me smile to know that you liked it so much glad I could make your day you just made mine ^^
5th Oct 2011 00:01am
Definitely one to be accompanied by a rather evil grin. A close up focussing on the jaw and toothy mockery. I think I'll remember this poem it shall be useful in the memory banks, this picture of blood amongst some romance.
Hell hath on fury like a woman scorned, and, A dead enemy always smells good.
Hell hath on fury like a woman scorned, and, A dead enemy always smells good.
5th Oct 2011 1:08am
