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A Simple Thought
When sending thoughts to cyberspace
to see if they can grow
They vanish
lost
without a trace
A blink
and it is so
~
Simple thoughts from simple we
solicit no reply
~
Bitter truth
disturbs content
and stings
the strongest eye
~~~
to see if they can grow
They vanish
lost
without a trace
A blink
and it is so
~
Simple thoughts from simple we
solicit no reply
~
Bitter truth
disturbs content
and stings
the strongest eye
~~~
Published 19th Feb 2018
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2018 10:02am
This can be a good thing as much as a bad thing in my mind... Good thoughts.
20th Feb 2018 11:35am
21st Feb 2018 6:47pm
Humans are social creatures, the longing for conversation is portrayed beautifully.
Thanks for sharing:)
E
Thanks for sharing:)
E
23rd Feb 2018 6:40pm
The last images of a dream...
This poem visits the remains of computer monitors at waking-up time...
... and the philosophical meditation where we try to rest during the day.
This poem visits the remains of computer monitors at waking-up time...
... and the philosophical meditation where we try to rest during the day.
